This is a sick beat!
Keep it up bretherin.
This song was a pleasure to Judge.
I quite ike this, but Im crazing more bass :(
The kick could use a bit more oomph too. but apart from that I love it!
The startup was very nice, your excessive use of filters is very interesting...
A bit too much going on at some points, also it really doesnt hurt to add in some high frequency sounds/melodies in there.
In my most professional advice I can give, Id up the melody by an octave or two and create a completely different bass-line.
go the almost 8-bit dubstep ^_^
Quality was nice.
Harmonic Value was excellent and the song itself was beautifully done.
I found it very calming.
The one problem I have with it however is the 32seconds of nothing but the same birds tweeting loop...
That was a little bit over-kill in my opinion.
But all in all its a beautiful masterpeice! I wish I made it, then I wouldve put a nice drum beat in it too :P
D'n'B isnt always my thing, but this certainly deserves the front page recognition it gets!
Mind you I would've given the kick just a little bit more oomph, if u know what I mean.
Good work, and keep it up bretherin!
very nice song, perfectly balanced and mastered.
keep it up!
This song has alot of potential but a few things need alot of work.
Firstly what are you using to record your midi?
Would you try using a composition program such as FL studio yto help use the midi chanels with more smoother instruments.
and i guess the best advice I could give would be in the form of two words.
Clipping: Is the term used for audio that is distorting. you know how on most programs theres a volume level indicator? well when the volume levels go into the red (Orange in a few programs cases) it means that the sound or sounds are distorting or wont sound the same once you export the song.
Quantising: simply is timing. The song isnt in time, and it is very evident at the beginning of the song.
but yes, apart from those few things the song itself is great! keep it up bud.
I would really like to give you a better score, because the song itself is made quite well!
unfortunately you ruined it with but two things...
Firstly, the crowd/group laughing in the background loop keeps reappearing which draws attention away from your work, I can tell that your trying to create some ambiance with this/these loops, but it really does ruin the song...
Secondly, You classed this as a tehcno song, which... it isnt...
Misleading genre classifications can be the death of your work....
But, I can see that you've mastered this quite well, and that you have something going for you!
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