Not too bad!
I gave you a 9 coz, despite the fact that the whole song had a really nice vibe to it, and the instruments all went well and moulded into each other well.
the song Lacked... a tune...
so to speak...
It had somewhat of a tune but it just repeated over and over again...
There was no climax, no build up.
Thats what seperates a good song from a fkn Wicked song!
like i said before, I will in future :)
Starlight has more of a climax but that was made before you posted :)
Thanks
Pretty damn good!
ima give you a 10 because it had a really nice sound to it!
However it seemed to sort of drag on a bit and the Beat and tune never changed...
I has expecting a bit of a climax but.... nothing.
Its still good all the same!
oh well, guess i wil put a climax into my songs in future,
This is why i need reviews, thanks dude :)
Iz not bad :)
Your right! it does have some potential!
but drum beats or whatever it is, that has an "off" tone instead of a defined beat is not a good friend to music, unless the tone harmonises or goes with the tune or Melody.
Its a good song, but it does lack a Build up and a Climax! try to use what you have there, and make it slowly build up to something and then Bust it out with a mad beat and melody and youll have a really great song!!! Keep at it! youll get there VERY soon!
Thank you for your input, I do greatly appreaciate it. :)
my god!
This is really good! esspecially for a first attempt...
you see u havge what im wishing i had, The ability to create what is in your mind! i cant do that... it just turns out shit... esspecialy with my drum beats (sigh) i just cant get the beats i want, down pat...
but yeah, i really like this man! your really captured the image with this one!
wat program u usin?
Thank you a lot, I'm glad u enjoyed it. But believe me, my biggest problem with music writing is to make what is in my mind (and find and make the instrument I want to use). Ohh... and don't tell me you don't have the ability! You can make beautiful melodies:) Only you should use more drum and maximize ur songs better.
Never give up, you will make great songs, believe me!
- And I use Reason4 by the way. -
quite extraordinary!
Let me say that, that was one of the best drum'n'bass songs i have heard! however i must say the ending was a bit dissapointing, I was sort of hoping for another breakou of Drum'n'bass with that beautiful Piano melody.
Question tho, What software did you use for that? and i take it you recorded yourself playing the piano yea? if so, your quite good! i would have plenty of trouble with trying to get it all in time.
Good work bud!
Yea, that might be a good ending. But at that moment I wanted to show this one..
I use Reason and Ableton + Vst plugs. I didn't play piano but MIDI keyboard... Thanks
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